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Re: I made a TV show Sample and I need real feedback

Unread postby TonyPrep » Wed 27 Dec 2006, 17:26:28

$this->bbcode_second_pass_quote('FilmShack', 'M')y system(Demonstration Farmette) is in a area about 20'x50', which is the same size space as the average east coast urban backyard. It is really an Urban Garden. I live in the inner city of Boston in a neighborhood called Roxbury, in a house build by Captain William Lambert in the 1700's. I think that I could feed my family and my livestock a starvation diet without outside inputs. But you would be surprised at how many "inputs" are available in the city, especially if you open yourself to being a part of a community. I do buy feed, from a feedstore that delivers it every two monthes. But this is a first step, I still only provide about 25% of my families food and lesser ammounts to my friends and neighbors. I have only been working on this for a decade, gimme more time and experience and we'll see where this goes. I get my chicks from a feedstore fifty miles north of my house or murray hatchery by mail.
Thanks, Patti. I don't want to discourage the kinds of things you're trying to push. The more people we can get to do the kinds of things you're doing, the greater the number of people who will survive the coming crises. But I have a thing about the word "sustainable". The word is attached to so many things today, to try to give them an aura of future proofing and greenness. However, "sustainable" has a fairly clear meaning to me. If it's sustainable, it can be done for as far into the future as you care to look.

Buying feed from a store or your chicks mail order is not sustainable. Providing only 25% of your own food is not sustainable (because you have to buy in the other 75%, and may not be able to do that indefinitely). Giving compost or food to others is not sustainable, unless they give you some of the nutrients from their land and the waste from the food you gave them.

So, you're doing some great stuff and I hope you encourage more people to do the same. But I'm uneasy about calling what individuals do sustainable, if it isn't.
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Re: I made a TV show Sample and I need real feedback

Unread postby davep » Wed 27 Dec 2006, 17:30:03

Wonderful stuff.

Are you looking at a timeline for teaching various aspects of permaculture in the series? It's a fairly complex business and needs a certain pedagogic structure (IMO) in order to get the message across.

It seems you've learnt a lot over the years. You need to ensure it comes across in a progressive fashion (I hope I'm not teaching my grandmother to suck eggs here...).

Keep it up! You're already doing well locally, which proves that what you're doing is of interest generally. I'm sure it's only a matter of time (and a lot of effort) before you get to spread the word further.
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Re: I made a TV show Sample and I need real feedback

Unread postby dogf » Wed 27 Dec 2006, 17:31:51

I would think RFD-TV or Outdoors would pick this up right away. From there you could grow to HDTV
Very nice. I think if you keep with the in city theme, you would appeal to many more.
If it can be done in the city, the suburbanite will try it.
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Re: I made a TV show Sample and I need real feedback

Unread postby FilmShack » Wed 27 Dec 2006, 18:23:16

Tony, baby steps. Baby steps. If gas hits five bucks I gallon I'm getting a rooster! Take me to jail, remember how far this has to go it is illegal in most citys. Baby steps. I think that it is a path, and it could be fully sustainable in lets say fifty years. It'll take great minds to weigh in on this, but in the information age maybe it can happen faster

DogF: What is RFD-TV? Thanks for the kind words. Means a lot.

DaveP: I'm trying to approach it from my own instinctive way. I am open to suggestions and welcome them. I think I know what I'm doing to mainstream it. The real problem for me is finding simple language, to explain complex natural processes. Feel free to pitch in and do me a solid, post my link somewhere for me.

Thanks,

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Re: I made a TV show Sample and I need real feedback

Unread postby MacG » Wed 27 Dec 2006, 18:33:44

$this->bbcode_second_pass_quote('Bat-Tzion', 'P')atti
After another look, a few more comments:
1. Don't talk about clothing. Your spinning and knitting may be lovely and fun but the issue of food far surpasses clothing in importance. I think it is irresponsible to waste time on the issue of preindustrial clothing manufacture when food is so important.


I have to interfere! The statement above might be true in sunny Israel, but not in colder climates. Europe dont manufacture the clothes it need on the continent anymore, and even in Spain they have cold days in the winter. Not to mention Germany. All historic evidence show that various aspects of "clothing" have taken more time than "food" in the 1600's. Clothes are a matter of life and death in a shorter time frame than food. It take a month or two to starve to death, but only hours to freeze to death.

I would wish for an EXTENSION of the clothing theme to include shoe making! You don't understand how important it is until you miss it.
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Re: I made a TV show Sample and I need real feedback

Unread postby TonyPrep » Wed 27 Dec 2006, 18:58:26

$this->bbcode_second_pass_quote('FilmShack', 'T')ony, baby steps. Baby steps.
Absolutely. Just remember that the aim is sustainability and that just using the word doesn't make it so.
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Re: I made a TV show Sample and I need real feedback

Unread postby Bat-Tzion » Thu 28 Dec 2006, 00:13:40

[quote="FilmShack"]Hey All!

Shalom Bat-Tzion:
<snip>. It worked for me. The goal of my system is to get people outside and producing not consuming, even you Bat-tzion! Design your garden for your needs.

Patti, I am. Right now I am growing veggies on about 1/2 acre of land and am preparing another 1/2 for medicinal herbs. By hand. And I'm 50.
You pep talk is inspiring, though! I'm gonna use that kind of pep talk on my middle aged friends!

As I said before I think you have to convey a strong message that the garden is for (nearly) everyone, not just the young and fit. I know you have to look a certain way to get the mainstream media--will you feature various guests with gardens on the show that look every which way, is that what you mean?

Some of the best permaculture gardens in the world are in the middle east!

We have had a truly sustainable way of life here, in the past anyway.
Which gardens do you mean? Do you mean actual ancient ones or modern ones? Geoff Lawton did some good work in Jordan. I have neighbors here with a forest garden of sixty species of fruit trees.
I'd like to know what and where.

PS get the sound working on your computer.

Oh it works, but yesterday we had a big storm and the electric was out, so I was typing on my laptop and the big screen / sound was not working. I was watching your video by the light of a middle eastern oil lamp on whatever battery power was still left in the laptop. Now the power's back on I'll listen.

I love your descriptions of how your farmette has become the focus of a neighborhood community. Besides your positive outlook, the animals are what does it. I tried veggies and I tried animals and the charm of the animals (even worms!) draws kids to the place.

As someone else commented, it would be wise to point out the economic benefits of backyard gardening. Could you mention the profitability of any given project (how much food it yields, what value?) With trees this can work very well--the seedling costs, say, $10, but the tree will provide many hundreds of dollars of fruit over its lifetime.

You may also want to consider focusing (at least some shows) on how women with young children can do their backyard garden while watching their children, that doubles the benefit, and that children can be involved in growing and/or processing the food, and can learn science and math and business that way. There's a book called Microfarming that has a great chapter on this topic.

Do you know Sharon Astyk in upstate New York? She is active on the ROE2 list and is in the process of writing a book on the re-ruralization of America. She has a small CSA there. Might I suggest some kind of tie-in between your show and this book? To me, effective re-ruralization starts in the back yards of cities and suburbs.

Please don't neglect rooftops as good places for gardens. Even sloped roofs can be made into gardens. (Get a lawyer to help you avoid liabilities from people falling off roofs!). By including roofs you will vastly increase the number of people to whom the show is relevant.
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Re: I made a TV show Sample and I need real feedback

Unread postby flametree » Thu 28 Dec 2006, 04:56:41

Great video,

I hope to see more of them

All the best.
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Re: I made a TV show Sample and I need real feedback

Unread postby Bat-Tzion » Thu 28 Dec 2006, 06:15:26

Patti
While potting up my Dead Sea Lavender seedlings I had more time to mull over your video. (including the sound).

The pace of the various scene cuts is a little too fast for oldster me. Maybe younger people are used to it.

I see you like worms. Great! So please try to include apartment-scale indoor + balcony permaculture, replete with under-sink worm bin, kitchen sprouting and herb growing, quail or rabbits in the corner of the balcony, and "hanging gardens" down the outside wall of an apartment, + trellises upward, dwarf trees hanging out over the railing, etc. Does anyone on this forum know of documented examples of well designed food-growing apartments? We could use that here in Israel, which is about as densely populated as Bangladesh.

Are you planning to include an episode on community gardens?

That's it for now. Will think some more==I've got lots more seedlings out there!
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Re: I made a TV show Sample and I need real feedback

Unread postby FilmShack » Thu 28 Dec 2006, 10:49:52

Shannymara: You rock too! Keep posting my link for me.
MacG: You said it! As you know, clothing is critical, just wearing my "Rabbit Head" hat in the house allows me to keep the heat down a few more degrees. Not to mention winter is cold! I love the research too! Awesome, and re-inspiring to me personally. I was starting to think the fiberstuff wasn't being understood. Thank you for the re-inspiration.
TonyPrep: Fair enough. How about Low Impact living on a path to sustainability? Too wordy huh?
Bat-Tzion: Thank you for your thoughts. The show is a big project and requires hours of programming with plenty of room for those ideas. I was specifically thinking of The Crazy Palestinian in Nablus. I hope you can put war and politics aside and cross support each other.

Thanks Peoples! Patti
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Re: I made a TV show Sample and I need real feedback

Unread postby queerrocket » Thu 28 Dec 2006, 11:52:44

I thought that was amazing, and I would love to watch that on TV. I'm not a big TV watcher, but I'd tune in for that.

I live in DC, and I have a small back yard. We have a small raised bed, where we grow lettuces, radishes, carrots, daikon, herbs, etc. Then I have a mound, where I grew corn, squash and beans as a tandem culture. It didn't work out as well as I hoped, but unfortunately, the yard doesn't get very much sunlight on that side.

Anyway, loved the show. Would love to see more!
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Re: I made a TV show Sample and I need real feedback

Unread postby byroncaloz » Thu 28 Dec 2006, 16:14:10

The sample is very high quality--better than many of the DIY type programs available on cable/satellite channels.

However, I tend to agree that references to certain buzzwords which are used to reflect an alternative approach may be offputting to some audience members. It may also set off a red flag to channels whose income may arise primarilly from petro-chemical based industries.

I realize that removing this can be perceived as dumbing down. However, your working dialogue is perfectly fine. It is the introductory material which could be made less "threatening" to those on the "right."

Approaching it as providing a way for individual independence...or bringing back the way people used to provide for themselves: that is a good approach acceptable by all folks. That was in your introductory comments and it works! Those who are concerned with dwindling resources and environmental damage will understand the necessity of going to local economies. Others may simply look at this as a more conservative financial move and a way to make their lives more secure.

No one would be bothered by dumbing down the message. The important thing is to give people tools to follow this path. They already get their reasons by other means.

One more concern: something I desire the most in any DIY program is something about the time, expense and effort of any project. For a person who works during the week and needs a good part of the weekend just to recover...and who has few daylight hours available for what time is left...time and cost management are essential considerations.
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Re: I made a TV show Sample and I need real feedback

Unread postby ak47 » Thu 28 Dec 2006, 16:33:37

Outstanding indeed. I found your link over at FrugalSquirrels.com Patti. Very Neat! Then I found this site on google while searching for your website. Still looking for that BTW.

While I'm not at all convinced about Peak Oil, I am interested in self reliance and sustainability. I'm definately a prepper.

So where is your website located on the net? Can't seem to find one.

I'm a webdesigner myself so if you need one, I'd be happy to hook you up with a simple one for free until you get your feet grounded and need something more permanant.

Let me know and I can send you some links to my clients sites to give you an idea of the work I do. I often do sites for free or at an extreme discount for clients whos cause I believe in. Here is one I just completed that hasn't gone live yet. Its a survival type website. http://www.usrsog.org/test


Meanwhile I'll post your google link to another site I frequent and show my wife your video later. I think you have some good potential and hope shows like this will help people rely on themselves instead of the local X-Mart.

Good luck!
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Re: I made a TV show Sample and I need real feedback

Unread postby TonyPrep » Thu 28 Dec 2006, 18:32:29

$this->bbcode_second_pass_quote('FilmShack', 'F')air enough. How about Low Impact living on a path to sustainability? Too wordy huh?
Yeah, too wordy. Perhaps "Towards Sustainable Living?"

Sorry, I do get hung up on the sustainable thing, because that's what we need to head for. To call something sustainable that, by itself, is not sustainable, is wrong and will give the wrong impression, I think (hey, this is all we have to do and we're sustainable). Over half the world's people live in cities. If they could all do this, it would be a big step, but it wouldn't, of itself, be sustainable.

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Re: I made a TV show Sample and I need real feedback

Unread postby FilmShack » Thu 28 Dec 2006, 19:29:57

TonyPrep: Thanks for your thoughts.
AK47: Thank you for the kind words. No site yet. I'd like to get more content together, if you come up with a logo, that would be great too! Please just keep post'n my link and shareing it. We're starting to make some inroads to networks. I think I will have more first appointment next month, so please keep up the pressure. I learned to shoot an AK47 last summer. Scary thing.
Byron: Thank you for the input. The reason why shows don't leave budget numbers is because it dates the show, and makes reruns less apealing, but I promise the info will be available on my legendary website.
QueerRocket: Did you water with city water? I found that did more harm them good?

Do you think a temp website with the link and some pictures would be a good idea?
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Re: I made a TV show Sample and I need real feedback

Unread postby ak47 » Thu 28 Dec 2006, 22:56:47

Yeah, I think a website is exactly what you need. When I hit "Garden Girl" in google, I get a number of different results and that is what led me here.

I'll tinker around with logo ideas this weekend.

Glad to help.
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Re: I made a TV show Sample and I need real feedback

Unread postby CityBoyGoneCountry » Thu 28 Dec 2006, 23:51:32

Looks like they deleted that thread from GardenWeb. I don't know why they would do that, especially when everyone seemed to like your video. I just don't understand how anyone could be against something like this, yet that's the second website to remove it. :?
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Re: I made a TV show Sample and I need real feedback

Unread postby FilmShack » Fri 29 Dec 2006, 00:01:09

Another one?! Man it sure is frustrating. City Boy, it just stuns me. What a bummer. Thanks for info though, and your efforts. It means a lot. I was just getting going there! Its hard enough to do this sort of thing when it is illegal, I guess it's illegal to talk about it and share it too!

I'm still in organic gardening section, but they'll probably find that one tommorow and through me off of that. Wow, ivillage the site for women, amazing

Totally Bummed,


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Re: I made a TV show Sample and I need real feedback

Unread postby BlisteredWhippet » Fri 29 Dec 2006, 03:37:30

$this->bbcode_second_pass_quote('', '
')These guys need to get some fresh air and produce something(other then testosterone)! Can I run my car on testosterone?


You know what your problem is? You don't know your audience.

Most of (us) are men. Not women. We say we like your breasts, so you decide to change the format from your trailer (long shots frolicking in the water and so forth). Then you use power tools and construct something... an experience most women do not want to have in the first place, so you've missed the selling point from the get-go. First, women have to be sold on the idea before they lift one finger to do anything truly constructive. For you to come along and present yourself as an ideal, for other women to emulate, is a worthy goal. But the fact is, with only yourself to sell this concept, it doesn't seem interesting. Men are more likely to watch your show as is, as long as you (yes) show skin. Why else would we watch it? Bob Vila can do the same stuff you do, faster and more accurately. All you have on Bob is tits. If you care about transforming the public in an immediate and direct way, go ahead and take your clothes off. If your vanity is more important than being effective, your show will never attract serious viewership anyway. So be more "Madonna" and less "Old lady that talks about sex on Oxygen".

Your car was built by testosterone. So were the roads, the filling stations, and just about everything else! So if you want to reach that demographic and are serious about making a real change in society, reach out to the people who are already willing to go to the hardware store and/or build/landscape something. Otherwise, you'll have to sell the idea to women. In that case, you'll have to present yourself as an attractive option to them. For this to work, the best format is one where you look classy (think Oprah) and feature lots of underlings (the testosterone monkeys) to do your bidding (think "empress" Martha Stewart, not "old biddy/ex-con" Martha Stewart.) Then, you'll have women clamoring to emulate and mimic what you do, and (surprise!) things will actually get done, because thats the way things actually work.

So strut your stuff but don't under any circumstances wear a sweater (old Martha)... unless you just made it or something.

Otherwise, if you want to go middle of the road and try being a success at penetrating the TV market, you should simply emulate an "Extreme Makeover" format mixed with, say, MTV2 series development attitude. Lots of young people- because, lets face it, the 40-up aren't going to change or do anything and those that will will just as eagerly watch the youth-oriented show. Designing a show with them in mind is going to make your show totally irrelevant to the youth (which DO have the required energy and intensity and ability to be creative.)

Lets not go about reinventing the wheel of social programming through television. Going at this idea punch-drunk is a surefire way to make sure your video concept gets hijacked by competitors, or just relegated to Google/AOL video anonymity watched only by internet junkies. That or (shudder) public access.

$this->bbcode_second_pass_quote('FilmShack', 't')his just illustrates how hard it is to get the attention of the corporates and how important it is for them to crush the message, even when it is completely sugar coated for mainstream america. Oh well, you can bring a horse to water, but you can't make'em drink.

All bummed out--Patti


Take your clothes off, put it on Google Vids, you'll get a small following for sure. Hold up, I didn't mean nude. I meant sexy. That means don't ever wear bulky sweaters. Take sexy shots. Leave your arms exposed. Smile a lot, seduce the camera. The message to men has to be: "If you can make this happen, your (wife/girlfriend/sister*) will praise you, show you their titties, and spend time outside getting exercise and having sexy, sexy fun, getting all wet and dirty, raising and eating chickens and aquarium food, and eat a nice meal, as a prelude to a night of passion." After which, men might actually do some of this stuff and/or be willing to at least bankroll their (Wives/girlfriends/sisters*).

No kidding. Otherwise, WE WILL NOT LISTEN TO YOU. Sorry, just the way it is. Certain things work to mass effect on TV, and some don't. Watering down your concept to fit the expectations of Israeli fundamentalist Rabbis or narcissistic old people is, frankly speaking, idiotic. Those people will end up watching the derivatives of your show on other syndicated shows, after they've been "sanitized" for the smaller niche market they represent. You either want to do the BIG YOUNG SEXY concept derivative and prepare to own the demographic or capitalize one of the smaller demographics and downgrade your expectations. It might just suit you, to do the "old person's" show, I don't know. Certainly careers could be made. But (Yawn!) BOOORING, know what I mean. :lol:

And expect Oprah & Martha, your direct competitors, will beat you to the concept and capitalize quickly. Roundup and Biotech giants will take your show, sexify it, and rehash with their products it in Xtreme Makeover style featuring sexy appeal and their products.

You gotta be realer than real. You have to make them look like the chumps, the followers, the imitators.

You've gotta ride the mythical line between slut and goddess to be a real video star. Western standards of televised entertainment demand it.


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Re: I made a TV show Sample and I need real feedback

Unread postby joakimlinden » Fri 29 Dec 2006, 06:36:10

I watched the promo and liked it.

I don't know if it's been posted here but there is a brithish show (season 2 is probably starting soon) called "It's not easy being green". It follows a british family who decides to move to the countryside and live completely off the grid, generating their own electricity, heat and growing their own food. A lot of people liked that series, but it has one serious flaw: They use massive amounts of money to get the whole thing up and running. Very few have that kind of money and land to use for green living, and that's where a show like yours could be a great alternative.

If you have a lot of computer experience it shouldn't be too hard to find a copy of season 1 on the internet - I had to, since the show doesn't air in Sweden where I live.

The family now has a website with a forum. Perhaps you should ask around there, and perhaps post the video.

http://www.itsnoteasybeinggreen.org/

Good luck!
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