by ReverseEngineer » Sun 23 Nov 2008, 15:52:01
$this->bbcode_second_pass_quote('Heineken', 'R')E, some of your commentary has a bombastic air that I think turns many off, because it is perceived as egotistical. Perhaps you don't intend that, but that is how it comes off---less frequently now than formerly, perhaps, which is what I was getting at in my earlier post.
Consider writing with your audience more strongly in mind.
I'm quite aware the style is bombastic

Its over the top in some cases, periodically I get reprimands for going too far. Thing is, it gets people's emotions riled up when you do this, and that gets you to underlying truth. You do not get this if you write to appeal to the masses or "make friends".
I DO consider the audience when I write Heineken. I often write with the specific goal of pissing off people

Its the only way you get responses out of people that come from deep inside, from the soul. You write plain prose, you get a lot of boring platitudes. I'm not interested in that stuff.
Anyhow, I try to make it entertaining and I try to make it informative, or at least question well the information before me since I don't know near as much about some of these topics as others here do. As to the style it comes off my keyboard with, well you can love it or hate it, but about nobody would say its boring stuff
Reverse Engineer