by MD » Wed 03 Jan 2007, 20:33:51
I'm with BW on this one. C'mon man, your story isn't even hittable blog material yet, much less publishable work.
If you are going to weave stories, they must be credible.
Keep writing though. For the cathartic effect if nothing else.
Stop filling dumpsters, as much as you possibly can, and everything will get better.
Just think it through.
It's not hard to do.